The price is indicated by red color so it catches you attention immediately.
However, it misses a few points.
1. It says Fast Relief. But there's no mention of how fast is fast.
2. Use of too many medical terms.
3. Confusion as to the target market.
Is this ad for new or existing customers? At first look, it seems to be for anyone reading the ad. There is the offer price of $9.90. But when you read the second paragraph, it mentioned that the offer price is valid only if you return any empty bottles. So this offer is only for existing users of the product. If this ad is for existing users, they would probably know about the effectiveness of the medication. This makes the first paragraph effectively useless. And highlighting the price does nothing to attract new customers as they do not get to enjoy it.
Learn from it so you can avoid making the same mistakes.